As mentioned, your work demonstrates promise, since it is imaginative and demonstrates a good deal of commitment. Some of your shots (for example, the opening long shot) are very well composed. You need to work on technique; the shaky-cam, for example, and some of the editing (for example, the "go"!). Be wary of including simulated violence; it rarely looks good unless it's well choreographed. I think you need to plan through your work a little more. You might want to split into two smaller groups for your next project, to make sure that everyone gets a fair shout. A slightly longer evaluation would improve your blog.
As mentioned, your work demonstrates promise, since it is imaginative and demonstrates a good deal of commitment. Some of your shots (for example, the opening long shot) are very well composed. You need to work on technique; the shaky-cam, for example, and some of the editing (for example, the "go"!). Be wary of including simulated violence; it rarely looks good unless it's well choreographed. I think you need to plan through your work a little more. You might want to split into two smaller groups for your next project, to make sure that everyone gets a fair shout. A slightly longer evaluation would improve your blog.
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